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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A phoenix reborn.

    And by the way emo people have very cool hairstyles (I am not emo though :( )

    Apr 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A phoenix reborn.

    And why do people hate emo things so much? I don't deliberately write it emo but it's just that I am very emotional, all my works are based on strong ...

    Apr 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A phoenix reborn.

    Some people say they like it, some say they hate it. I am confused!!!!

    Apr 28, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Coffee Break (a Poker Face by Lady Gaga parody)

    Ok so poker face is my favorite song ever and so is lady gaga but whatever I liked this parody too (quite unusual of me- don't like my favorite things ...

    Apr 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A phoenix reborn.

    @elinor I am so sorry for being rude. You're still a bit young and it's absolutely ok if you misunderstood it. I just got angry a little bit for the ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A phoenix reborn.

    @elinor Please try to read and understand the poem properly before making such comments about the poem and especially rating me. The phoenix was a metaphor. This poem is about ...

    Apr 17, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)

    This was fantastic! I could actually imagine kesha singing this in a pirate video lolz! And by the way it's a myth that pirates made people walk the plank in ...

    Apr 17, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Heart Of A God ( Intro and Ch 1)

    I agree with you that there was too much happening too soon. I wanted to complete my first chapter as fast as I could, I really needed it as I ...

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: New Story! *Edited*

    Fantastic very well written. Waiting for the next chapter.

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Urban De Sauveterre: Dance With the City, Eat Your Own Flesh

    Definitely got the potential to be published. Your language is nice and most probably is a product of vigorous practice isn't it? Very good, one of the rare pieces that ...

    Mar 27, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: But That Couldn't Be Helped. It Never Could.

    A truly excellent piece but just a bit too mysterious. Perhaps you shud explain a little bit more to strike a perfect balance.

    Mar 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Ode To My Love

    Hey please comment people I wrote it for my gf as a valentine's day gift.

    Feb 10, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: 101 Ways to Die #3, #4, #5, #6

    I wanna name my character spikey And I wana die by eating hair gel mistaking it for jelly!!!!

    Jan 30, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Last Good Bye (edited:ending)

    If you like my story please star it. It means a lot to me if you star it.

    Nov 10, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Last Good Bye (edited:ending)

    Hey everybody, thnx for the new reviews. I see that starleene doesnt like my style of writing. But I cant help it this is how I write, this is my ...

    Nov 9, 2009


Poetry is a phantom script telling how rainbows are made and why they go away.
— Carl Sandburg