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Re: The Rain
I just loved this. It was cool how you entertwined both the rain and emotion together to make it one constant, vibrant theme in the poem. It felt easy to ...
Apr 27, 2015 -
Re: A Cat Named Felicity
Um, yea, wow. In the story I'm writing, I just publish it one chapter at a time. So it's really incredible that you were patient and persistent enough to write ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: the symphony of the drum
This is amazing. I am definitely a short story person, and yet this caught my attention just like a great short story would. I was captivated by your use of ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Summary
I agree. Publishing costs points, so just write your story (or chapter) and see what we think about it. "The victims were found with their faces gone. The victims have ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Sweep the Sky:Chapter One
Thanks!!! I'll take those into mind:)
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: Sweep the Sky:Chapter One
Thanks so much for reading, and I'll definitely take your nitpicks into mind
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 31 Part 2
I just got on this site. Your story is the first I've read. I have one sentence for you. Your story is so cool I could read it all day! ...
Apr 13, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 31 Part 2
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