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Thank you!

Hey, thanks for the review!! I realize that I didnt capitalize anything - capitalization promotes capitalism.

Thanks!! And "but I like the way your voice gets tangled in the coils of wire" is one complete thought, it just runs into the next line.

Thanks for the review!

It's totally fine! I don't know if you can delete comments - but I'm super bad at navigating this site so don't take my word for it.

You made some interesting connections - thanks for the review!

Thanks for reviewing

Thanks!

Thanks for reviewing this and it makes sense that you're a tad confused - I'm gonna pm you w/ the meaning.

Hey, thanks for the review! I'm going to take your advice and try rewriting this poem - then I'll see which version I like better. As for the meaning, I'm ...

Aw, I'm sorry!

I'm not entirely sure why this posted twice, sorry!!!

Hey, Just dropping by for a quick review. Your poem was quite good. It evoked a lot of emotion, and for the most part it flowed nicely. It was a ...

that's not quite what I was going for.

*I wrote question, but I meant section. My brain sometimes confuses itself.