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This poem is very well written, and descriptive. The different sections add character and expression to the poem. Your metaphors and analogies continue to make sense throughout the entire poem. ...

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I love this poem! Great metaphors and description. The line: "- you can't be scared if you don't know how." Seems so simple but speaks out so loud and clearly. ...

Nice poem. Couple things: 1.) "no one understand." You may have wanted that to be: "no one understands." 2.)"others say why the not." You might have wanted to say: "others ...

This is a great poem with a large amount of meaning. You do a great job of being descriptive, you will continue to get better with more writing. Keep up ...

I love this poem! I love the four line stanzas it really show separation throughout the poem; each one tells a different story. And each of those come together to ...

This is so great! The descriptions and imagery in this are absolutely breath taking. You write a piece that I think many can relate to, and I think that is ...