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PLEASE tellme there is going to be a second part to this

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS POEM OMG IT IS JUST BRILLIANT I COULDN'T FIND ANYTHING WRONG WITH IT BUT YEA UM ANYWAYS YEA I LOVED YOUR POEM!!!!!! P.S. PLEASE READ AND ...

tHANK YOU FRO POINTING THAT OUT TO ME AND I HAVE RECENTELY ADDED NEW POEMS TO MY PORTFOLIO PLEASE READ AND REVIEW THEM

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT IS THE WEETES THING I HAVE EVER HEARD I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!

I laughed so hard my teachr threatened 2 write me up *laugh laugh laugh*

i noticed alot of typos where you have put {have in the place of had} but othe than that it was a good story please keep me informed of more ...

I agree with *JADEREDNALIH* this is a very good story i love it please let me know if there is going to be a second part

i AGREE WITH Dr. Jamie Bondage IT SEEM LIKE A PROLOGUE BUT YES BY ALL MEANS MAKE IT A LONGER STORY I WOULD SO BE INTERESTED IN READING IT OH ...

Okay i am confused in the last chapter u said that carmen called sophia and told her to ride with "pretty-boy" yet he gets mad about it ? im confused

WOW!!!! I really like this story especially now that their eyes have met there is no telling how this will end up... For once I couldn't find any mispelled words ...

i LOVE your stories but i have seen ALOT of puncuation marks and misspelles word and so on and so forth but other than that I am REALLY into your ...

ok i agree with basically everyone who did a review i just have one question....who the duck is candy?

yet again I LOVE the story pleas ekeep me posted i actually didn't see any typos so I believe you are doing REALLY well and yet again PLEASE keep me ...

OH MY GOD this has such good emotion demostration in it i LOVE your story PLEASDE keep me posted

in all else good story but a few typos I am to tired to give you a REAL critic I might reread it tomorrow and let you know what I ...