Published November 28, 2006
Dashing through the snow,
On a pair of broken skis,
Crahing into trees,
Screaming all the way!
The sno-w is turning red,
I think I'm almost dead,
I woke up in the hospital,
With a tree trunk through my head!
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Oh My God! so funny
Love Rebbecca
Oh my goodness! I think I just peed my pants! That was hilarious!
I laughed so hard my teachr threatened 2 write me up *laugh laugh laugh*
Nice. How befitting of the season.
However, that would actually suck hardcore if that happened to someone.
I am pretty sure I have heard this before, but it has not gotten old yet.
I've heard it seven million times, it seems like, but bravo for posting it.
lol, I like a good laugh in the morning, well done!!!!
Wouldn't you be dead? And how thick is the trunk compared to the head?
Snow and trees don't rhyme, so it throws off the familiarity of the tune.
Other than that, decent rendition.
Appropriate timing for the time of year, of course, and well done. I absolutely love spoofs (I even spoof some of my favorite songs). No suggestions that I can think of right now, but I'll let you know if I do. Thanks for the laugh.
Heh, nice, V-amp. If not a little randomly bloody. ^_~