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hey i see that you choosed heruin as a subject in your piece i wasnt expecting to find an expressive song like this one , you know because its not ...

hi fortis here's what i think, generaly it was one of the wonderful pieces i read before i'll tell you why....first the expressive simple and short sentences ,cause sometimes we ...

hey there.. so for this piece i think it's very nice ...simple you have some mistakes like dieing dying and posabilitys possibilities liveing living deth death ...they are simple mistakes ...

i found your work very intresting its like a personel situation and you wrote it from your heart ...i looved how you started this song just like a story or ...

this song is great i loved everything about it.... the rhythm the sentences ...the ideas it was meaningful ..and my favourite part is the begining .... Frozen blood, rotting flesh ...

before i start the review i wanna say that i realy liked your song its expressive and what most liked is the short sentences because thats the way i like ...

hey there i looved your song but i would make some changes like ... You’re not just another guy, You’re the brightest star in the night sky no no .....its ...