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Not really sure if you wanted someone to critique this but as I have read through it and I got a couple of things to say thought I would just ...

Really liked your story. Wondering where you are going with it, One thing i noted is watch your tenses hard i know, it’s easy to miss after you have read ...

Firstly have to admit I have not read through all the other chapters but I will soon as I get time. Greatly enjoyed reading this chapter and i really like ...

I really liked this, it flows really well and i did not have any problems reading it at all. It jumps straight into the story and builds up suspense in ...

I like your story I'm interested in where it is going. I want to know why is he the last man on earth why is he laughing all the intrigue ...

Hey great poem. Expresses your opinion very well and in such away that we can see the writer is open to many views and has thought of the issues the ...

This was a great story. I started and did not stop reading it. In fact I regret the fact that it had to come to an end. I thought your ...

As I read this I had the feeling that the characters were very young possibly 13 threw to 15 so I must admit that I was startled when they go ...

Hi Lurlene,,,,,,, I must say I liked your story. It’s cute and sweet and has the air of good chick lit. However, it would be nice if that last paragraph ...

I like the fact that this poem seems to jump right in and personal I got the feeling of loss, which the tile of the poem pretty much throws in ...

great poem it speaks and totaly has a voice of its own i especilay like these oppening five lines "A weapon, like no other, has been formed from my soul. ...

okay i like this and it is oviusly well thouhgt out but the fact that it does not have any commers makes it kinda hard to read. i dont like ...

i like the fact that the poem definetly has a certin tone to it and i get the meaning of the poem. but i think it seems to jump from ...

i like this it keeps the reader wondering what is the servent of light and what does he have to fight. the flow of the words is smooth making it ...

well its a good peice of writing but if you want it to be a poem you have to organize it like a poem. eg "My fingers are on the ...