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This was pretty good :) I liked it :) I am not very good at reviews on things like these, and my mind is a bit off on inspiration for ...

First thing I got to say... Wow. I just recently lost my Grandma and... Wow. This whole thing is true. It's all just amazing! The meaning behind it is really ...

Hiya :) This really was a short poem. Like znale said, you really could have made this better and or longer. Now, while it really is short it still is ...

Hey there :) Ok, to start with I hope none of this sounds TOO harsh D: It's all constructive :3 Ok. While this was a really good poem at heart, ...

Well snap XD I thought this was really good :) I love the style of poetry that you wrote it in. I love the way that it all flows through ...

Sorry to be a bummer dude, but when I finally got around to reading this... Lets just say the plot of the story doesn't help how I am feeling right ...

This was a really good story! :) I loved it. The adventure, the action, the suspense. It was all extremely well done :) Stuff like this is what you WANT ...

Ok. Sl4y4 here coming at cha with a fresh new review. This story was very... Interesting, but very plain. take in note that all of this henceforth is CONSTRUCTIVE criticism ...

Yo yo, Sl4y4 coming at 'cha with a fresh review. This was really nice :) I liked the word play and how you set everything out. There was one spelling ...

Oh ma gawd I love it! The use of descriptive words and the way it is set out. Just amazing! I could go on and on about how good the ...

It was a really good poem to me :) I tend to write like this, so while i didn't actually get any actual meaning out of his at all, I ...