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Re: Walt's Receipt
That's so cool! I will definitely go check that out, thank you. Glad I could help.
Mar 10, 2017 -
Re: (Undecided) Chapter 1
This is review is just downright amazing. I do have a lot of problems with grammar, so it really helps when someone points them out. I will work my best ...
Mar 9, 2017 -
Re: Firebreed chapter 1-- Red Stained Note (Edit)
If you want me to review anything else, I'd be happy to. Just let me know :smt001
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: (Undecided) Chapter 1
Thank you so much! This really helped me to realize what I need to change. I get what you mean about the short chapters. I've been trying to find a ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: Empty Draft
Yep! That helps, thank you. I didn't realize with the spider webs until later. I wasn't completely sure about the rain forest thing so just disregard that. I'm glad I ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: Sannio - The World As We Know It
I'm really glad I could help! You don't have to review any of my work in return, unless you really would like to :smt001 and 2 a.m. is the best ...
Mar 7, 2017 -
Re: Invisible
Hey Tulip! First I hope that you feel better. That pain sounds terrible. Also, thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you liked it and my goal was ...
Mar 5, 2017 -
Re: Invisible
Thank you so much! That was extremely helpful. I will definitely take all of this into consideration when I edit this. As I said, I wrote this a while ago ...
Mar 5, 2017 - Re: Praise the Lord Mar 5, 2017
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Re: Dreaded Dinner Party (Prologue)
No problem, glad I could help. I know the whole grammar thing, mine needs some work too.
Mar 4, 2017 -
Re: Brother
I cried. This was just so emotional. The only thing I will point out is when you wrote "Mother and stepfather will doubtless tell you about how often I lied." ...
Mar 2, 2017 -
Re: After he left the revised version
I would have written a review if I had found anything wrong with this, which I didn't. I do want to point out THAT LAST LINE OMGGG I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...
Feb 28, 2017 - Re: Life's Stage Feb 28, 2017
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Re: Face to Face
In the second paragraph, the first line says "...a little anti- sometimes?" Maybe you should change that to something else. The intent of that sentence isn't very clear and it ...
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: All In Our Promise
Ok so for the first sentence, I think you should change it to ""have always been my enemies". I loved the sentence that said "I think they secretly hope for ...
Feb 26, 2017
