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  • Other » General, General Re: Why am I a Christian?

    *sigh*....I really hate these pieces...I really do. For two reasons. One they generally use EXTREMELY simple language and require EXTREMELY little thought to write. Second it implies that Christians a

    Jun 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Rainy Day

    This poem is really good. There are parts of the poem where it is a little repetitive such as It is raining Steady and consistent I am alone Safe and ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition

    This is really cool! I never liked romeo and juliet, thought it was probably the most overrated piece of literature out there, but this IM edition makes it sound really ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: First kiss

    This is really sad :( You use really good descriptive words to describe the kiss and the ending is just depressing (in a good way?: kinda. i don't know). Never ...

    May 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Because I'm a Christian

    *sigh* guess im going to have to be the lone party pooper. First of all Christians in America have no place in saying that they're being discriminated against. Unless you ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Figure Skating

    very good story. i guess it sorta shows the struggles that teenagers go to when they get discouraged? sorta? haha whatev. but i know how this girl feels. in band ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Never succumb

    Meh...I have to admit. I don''t really like it that much. The syntax is unfavorable (at least to me) and just the whole general plotline of the entire story is ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Time.

    I like this very much. All our most precious moments only last a second and even then we can barely remember them and sometimes they are even forgotten. Our laughs ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You

    I love this essay. It shows a mature side of relationships. That a real relationship isn't a hollywood one without any problems, just love love love love love. The problems ...

    Apr 12, 2011


Don't be pushed around by the fears in your mind. Be led by the dreams in your heart.
— Roy T. Bennett