skorlir

Haha. Ha. *Not taking this seriously enough to review*

You must know that your link is user-specific and loads the google account of whoever clicks it, not your poem. Try a piratepad/writerfeed pad. The former is piratepad.com, the latter ...

Meh. :) It's a throwaway project.

Mmm... okay. The title is [Refrain], hinting to the lack thereof, and suggesting a purposeful omission (ulterior definition of the word: to abstain). I posted this under "poetry > lyrical," ...

Works in all modern (i.e.; Windows 8 ) browsers!

onmouseover events do fire, but it seems I cannot change text and background colors... Disappointing.

Thanks, K!

Well... thanks!

"It" is faux pas. I say in the description that "the title has much to do with the meaning." Maybe that clarifies a few things?

Hrmm... "I once knew as my grandfather's" can also be viewed as a protracted adjective clause. That's what I was gunning for.

In some capacity, I am making a statement about Nate's new submission form. He said it "should" preserve whitespace, so I was testing it. That's why I leave the results ...

The top one is what it looked like when I tried to copy it from word into the YWS submission editor. :)

Extraordinary. No review, of course. But I thought I'd let you know. ;)