skeptik_225

length. Just a little tiny bit longer. I enjoy short poems, there's sometimes a stronger impact. The acrostic I didn't pick up on but its' late and I'm dumb, sorry ...

Lots of potential with this poem. As previously mentioned good rhyming and there's a strong sense of flow. The concept at intially, especially in the first 2 stanza was a ...

:D I love that Spongebob episode (I like the randomness) Beautiful poem, the first stanza especially drew me in nicely. All the If ____ is only ____'s were playful and ...

A tad on the repetative side but I enjoyed the concept. It was a little confusing at times to figure out who was "she" and "her" and "girl" whether that ...

i love this: "starstruck lovers in comets of beauty collide and explode and the rest of society is left to pick up the mangled pieces of broken hearts and stolen ...

wow,,,what can I say? I bet you want constructive critisim but my tanks on empty after reading this. BEAUTIFUL imagery and very specific word choice, I liked that! I love ...

ok! i agree this is too simple but there's lots potential. I like the guitar alot! YAY guitar power. I suggest that you use it like you did in your ...

totally relate with the character 110%, and i dont think that the length of your writing needs improvement however if you do keep it a short paragraph, you need a ...

niiice, i like your angle and approach (not strange, unique) to the story but ya...maybe i'm a moron (its ok i'll admit it) but i didn't quite figure out what ...

gurl you need a hug! I'm reading this and I'm totally blown away by ur incredible imagery, passion, emotion, words and hell you rock. You're my hero, its it funny ...

The line 'Damned to eternal solitude' seemed over dramatic, but i do like the imagery of room overflowing of tears, perhaps if you build on that idea or be more ...