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Yeah! Got it. Thanks

Hi bella. I just realised my no capitals mistake. Yeah, now that i read this again i see your point. ' Bumchikaduooma' basically just indicates that she is feeling funny ...

Thanks adrian. Yes, things will be explained somewhere in the later chapter. The reason i am not able to explain everything is that some people get bored if you become ...

I am very happy you liked it . yes i know about my run on sentwnces as many people have told me that in reviews. I will try to work ...

I hope i do.

Wow! that was quite a review thanks

I am really happy to know you like my story. Punctuation is a nightmare to me, but i will certainly try to focus on it.and this helped a lot. Thanks

i am so sorry that this chapter in not good at all but i could not understand how things should work out in this chapter. so sorry but please still ...

Okey dokey

Do you all want me to countinue the story? I will be posting the 3rd chapter soon

Thanks a lot. I am glad you liked it.

Thanks a lot adrian. I apologize for the wrong punctuation since i am not that good at it. You have asked me a lot of things and i can't answer ...

Thanks a lot. I will definitely keep these ings in mind next time.

Thanks Ella. I will surely keep that in mind next time.

Anks a lot nora. Yeah i just realized i completely forgot to use quotations. My bad. I will surely keep your suggestions in mind next rime