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Okkkaayy Chapter 17! Phew, a long one~ Unfortunately, the mob mentality of the army here not even investigating what the Jeweloids are all about is all-too realistic. So, kudos on ...

Hokay, next chapter! First thing, you don't need those asterisks over the new month names, since Savannah defines what they are two words later. If you were going to have ...

Chapter 15~ And already.... Oh my god, Goro really is dense as heck about this stuff. I guess it's to be expected cause he's not really exposed to many romantic ...

Chapter 14! The more I read the more I like COBALT. He's a good in-between for Goro's stubborn, flighty nature and Cent's pessimistic one. Interesting bit, COBALT talking about how ...

Chapter 13, woo! And right off the bat I'm like 'lol Goro welcome to the world of traumatic injury recovery' He's gonna be a creaky ass old man one day ...

Hokay, back at it with chapter 12~ I like the little glimpses into Goro's past that we get. It's not too much, they're little blurbs, but it's enough to get ...

Alllright, chapter 11! As you can tell I had a few hours to kill~ Anyway! The chapter starts out a little slow. I've been interested to see what Goro's been ...

Allllright, chapter 10~ Like usual your descriptions are excellent. I don't know if you did it on purpose, but there's a distinct change in tone from the previous chapters that ...

(okay im sorry if this posts twice, it's supposed to be a review!) I figured I can start reviewing these as I go (its snakes-on-a-plane, lol). So far I really ...