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Ah! As I was reading this, I was thinking to myself "This person definitely got attacked by the plot bunnies when going to sleep or waking up." And then you ...

Hey there, I'm Jade and I'll review this for you as I read, alright? Let's go. Madison stood on the sandy beach of the Pacific Ocean. Staring out into the ...

Hi, I'll be reviewing this lovely piece for ya. Kay? Alright, first off we've got these two characters, Meghan and Marissa. Both M names so it can get kinda confusing ...

I'll review as I go, alright? :] I looked out the window for an escape. It was a crisp Autumn day; my favourite. The intense sunrays of summer weren't beating ...

Hey there, I'll review as I read alright? I hate this. I mean you get to the door after three hours of failing to pop that zit on your forehead ...

First off, I want to say that I really really liked this poem. You conveyed the emotion beautifully. I felt in the moment. Fabulous stuff right ther. ISSUES I HAVE: ...

The Nature of Jade is a YABA book at my school so if I read it I get extra credit on an English test. I think I might check it ...

This was a very powerful piece. I was very touched by the way you expressed abortion through the child's eyes. I am very pro-life and I really loved this poem. ...

Wow, I really really loved this poem. I think your use of rhythm is very nice. I also really liked how you rhymed, not too much that it was overpowering. ...

OMG, that's my name! Jade that is. I like your imagery a lot a lot. However your grammar needs work. You capitalize the first word in every sentence, even if ...

This was a really good poem. I liked how you set out to describe what it felt like to turn away someone you love just because you know you should. ...

This was a great piece. Tons of beautiful imagery and language. Very well written without many mistakes I could find. To my knowledge, your grammar was in line. And I ...

This was a great piece. I really enjoyed it. The despair Jenny feels really jumps off the page, er screen. I liked how you described other people from her point ...

This was a good piece. I really enjoyed it. Although there are some things you can improve on. First of all, to me, it felt like a plain cracker, without ...

Sunny! I loved Just Listen. I seriously fell in love with Owen the first time I met him. :] I have a series that I got really hooked on. It's ...