silentwords

I really liked this poem. There were some excellent images and a strong emotion through out the poem. There were some really vivid and creative lines. There was also a ...

This was a well written poem. It had a very nice flow and rhythm to it. I enjoyed the rhyming, and none of it seemed forced. I was just being ...

I really liked this poem! There was a strong emotion throughout. I also liked the way that you placed the words on the page, it really gave an impact. I ...

I really liked this poem! It flowed really nicely, and the rhymning felt natural. The words you chose really gave it a dark and melodic mood. I was just being ...

Hey (: This was really interesting and entertaining! It had a weird, eerie, quirkiness to it and I think that's what I really liked about it. It was just so ...

I really like this poem! I thought that the imagery in this was really good, especially in this stanza: Glass pierces her skin, with cuts that run deep as the ...

Ouu I really liked this piece! I really liked the concept, it is not definitely not something you read on here everyday. It was different and refreshing. I also love ...

Wow...this was so good! I really think you should finish this, and if you do please let me know! I loved it. I'm usually not that big on romance because ...

I really loved the imagery in here! This was very descriptive and so full of emotion. It is hard not to get swept into the dark, intense mood of this. ...

There isn't a lot for me to review here, since it is so short. I wouldn't really even call it a story, but rather part of a story. You did ...

I really liked this poem. It had a powerful and difficult topic, and I think you portrayed it well. I especially liked the last stanza when the mother and daughter ...

I really like this story! It is clear that you are a talented writer (: The plot is exciting, the story is well-writen, and your characters are very dynamic and ...

I'm really liking this story! Your dialouge and characters are very realistic. I can really see and feel things from the MC's point of view. You have that character to ...

I am really enjoying this story so far! I think you should continue it, I really want to see where it goes (: My only major problem with this story ...

Wow.. this was so good! There was a lot of strong emotion throughout. By the end I actually thought I was going to cry. I think if you continued writing, ...