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ehh it was relitivly good..not my favorite subject to read but was alright.. near the end whisper those 2 words...and then you never said what they were ? maybe i ...

christy !!! how are you ? haha... i liked this...i would love to see it in a story type of poem thing...all around the idea of wanting to be there...but ...

well i don't like to read stories of any kind.. and i don't even hang out in this forum part of YWS but i am glad Yoda put the link ...

The rain tastes sweet on my parched tongue. My eyes forever skyward. I hear weeping and my name being called out. The voices just grow fainter. My heart is silent ...

ehh i know what its like to be here.. the world echoing your words back to you.. the pain of knowing that your the only one there...its often thought as ...

i didn't like it...i saw 3 different scenes with no way of knowing how i got there...that annoyed me... granted its probably there to help add to some chaos ? ...

haha when i read the title i was thinking beating / ignore ... this hits very close to home for me....haha... here at my house... there is no one here...usually.. ...

the repetition of blank is a present didn't go to well for me.. i didn't like that... and when you used occasionally that threw it off... the rhyme was okay...i'm ...

ehhh did anything else happen ? and who was with you ? and other spefic details would be nice.. i myself didn't like it... sorry.. but here where i live.. ...

i would love this in haiku form ! it seems like a perfect fit for a haiku.... and if you don't know what a haiku is.. its 3 lines... first ...

Temptation drags, them onto the limestone rocks. Catching sandcastles on the way through, But it doesn’t care it neither feels nor seeks pain, but it has enemies like me and ...

haha i never had dreams... to lazy... to even try... but i do know what its like to be in the boys position... being battered by "friends" and peers... i ...

ehhh.. dancing is ehhh physical excertion.. something people don't comply with this day and age... maybe on a videogame i'll dance... but in reallife ? i doubt it... unless i ...

i found typos.. and things like that.. perhaps this person is your self ? not a person you'll actully meet... a being thats within you i suppose....that can keep you ...

i suppose its to how some people manipulate others.. or that you just fell in love when they didn't... its a terrorible thing.. that it is... i'm sorry you cried... ...