shusher

Thank you all so much for the likes and reviews! I'm so shocked this made it to front page! Again, thank you all so much.

congrats on literary spotlight! I'm just saying, if this work didn't make it, I'd be a little frustrated. It's one of the best, or the best, piece of I've read ...

Okay! As long as it's intentional. Thanks for the bbcodes tip.

I gave it an edit. Hope you like it. Now, here's this rhyme that doesn't work.

I just edited this lol (the poem, not the comment)

It's 6! I need to change the description lol

Thank you both. You're too kind.

I was thinking the same thing about the repetition of broken lines. You make several good points. As far as psalm 5 connections... I was mistaken. It is psalm 6. ...

How on earth are you so good at interpretation? Your second paragraph is literally what I wrote down in my notes of psalm 5, and you read straight through my ...

I do what I can *too cool shades*

Thank you for the review! I didn't make "My Head Hurts" the title, in order to say the main issue is that I don't know who the author of this ...

I think it's the start of the character. The story kind of jumps right into the... drama... action... whatever. Anyways, you do give a small background of setting. Here is ...

Well... good at grammar is a stretch xP

That change is a very good idea!

Some poems are extremely clear, too clear I'd say, but that is their goal. With this poem, clarity appears needed, to me, because you're very clear the first half, then ...