shloka19

This is simply beautiful. I really, really like how you've structured it to sort of look like the waterfall. The imagery and metaphors are perfect. One nitpick though~ I flow ...

Hey! So I really liked your essay, clearly you've put in much thought behind it. Just a few nitpicks~ Cinematic techniques help a movie become more entertaining therefore everyone uses ...

Hey dogs! I've never reviewed something of yours before, so here goes nothing. Nitpicks~ At 5:00 PM exactly, he stepped out of the car and told his chauffer to go ...

Hi NiNLove, I really like your poem... And I totally agree with you--novels can have an almost out-of-this-world pull. Anyways, I think you can make it easier for the reader ...

Hey! I really liked this piece, it was sweet, especially the singing part. Nitpicks~ I can't understand your mind I think this sounds a bit off... maybe you could rephrase ...

I really, really like this piece. The only problem I saw was the spacing, but that's easy to fix. I especially love the analogy of art that you used. I ...

I really like this poem; its short and sweet but gets the point across just as well. I also like the feeling of waking-up-from-an-absolutely-awesome-dream-and-regretting-it-later that you are trying t

Hey! I really like your piece- the characters seem real, and I love, love, love dystopian fiction. We were both simply beading about the bush. I think you meant to ...

Hey! I love this poem, as always :P The sea is behind me, And I need to get there. I think it would clear up the confusion if you replaced ...

I really like this poem and it reminded me of the little girl we saw in Gandhi Ashram- I know you don't rememebr her but here's my impression of her ...

The *insert petname or name whichever here* Surprise surprise! I finally joined this site... nice surprise no? Anyways, I loovvvvveeeee all your poems and you know it! So that's my ...