shiney1

Bravo Sol! I couldn't have said it better! I find it amazing how you can convey controversial things so smoothly in poetry... One things is that recieve should be "receive." ...

I have watched you and you seem to lack a whole lot of punctuation in your works :( so it sounds like rambling. More elaborate revied later.

I agree with the post above. I like the voice it has, pretty unique. I think it is just fine for a little girl telling the story. Very nice :)

AD;LAJD;LAJF;LJA;LDJFJJL; I LOVE YOU (This is not a review, because that is not a piece. :P)

This is wonderful! Short and sweet, easy to understand but deep. Someone who can put those elements successfully together has talent ( and God's help ). Very nice!

Whoa. That is just awesome. I don't know what else to say... Just wow!

If you upload it to a website you can post it. I post pixels here all the times.

I like this. It shows that even though we have equality by law, there is still separation between genders in classification and expectations (I hope I am making sense XD ...

I'm not really sure what to say about this, except that it's very unique, a bit confusing at times, but interesting to read :D So I like it...yeah XD

Amazing! That's all I have to say, really.

This was so touching! I love all the emotion, and you expressed God's love well. This is great. Just one or two things. He says, "All I have to offer ...

Genius!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

@ Mustard I wrote it from my heart, and it was enough for the majority, which is what I wanted. I disregarded all the true elements a poem must have, ...

Thank you all for your kind words :)

Thank you all :)