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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Gum Paste

    @ScarletDreams14 Hello! Taking humor seriously? Now that's humorous! And it is actually a poem, it's called an acrostic poem. Seriously look it up, they exist (but are rare on this ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Why Are Boys So Cute?

    I just felt the need to comment on your question about the hardships men face that women do not: Some are child custody after divorce and false accusation of rape. ...

    Jun 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Quiznos

    Thank you!

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Gum Paste

    Thanks for the review! Actually, I meant that the umbrella guards against plainness like it does against the rain. Not really that it's against the cake XD Maybe I should ...

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Pocket Change

    Thanks a bunch for the review! I never thought of adding dialogue before. Very interesting! Of course, I should probably try it on a normal poem first since acrostics are ...

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Pocket Change

    Thank you! Yes, the second stanza is about the same man. I'm actually happy that the poem is not easy to decipher, so I won't give anything away, but you ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Dedicate Yourself Girls

    Well said Isha.

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Sanctuary

    You are welcome :)

    Apr 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Pizza

    The heck? What is the purpose? What does this all mean? And why do I like it?

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sponge Bob

    Thank you!

    Jan 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sponge Bob

    Thank you!

    Jan 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sponge Bob

    Thank you!

    Jan 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sponge Bob

    Thank you!

    Jan 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sponge Bob

    Thank you!

    Jan 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sponge Bob

    Thank you!

    Jan 3, 2013


october smells like being ten years old and not scared of anything
— dissonance