shima

Holy poetry, Batman. This is awesome. Pure gold. I have never been in Sacramento and it still feels like I have lived there for years. And all that with less ...

Well, that was some bloody dark stuff to read at 11:00 pm. I loved it. It could be seen as a metaphor (though I am lost for what. Maybe the ...

It rhymes okay, kudos for that, but it seems too much rhyming. Try to break it up once in awhile - end a piece of a poem with a word ...

was weird, to say the least. I liked it personally, but my favourite writer is Neil Gaiman so go figure. The RPG angle was funny. The main character was likeable, ...

Okay. Well. Lets begin. It is a story, that much I can say. It is meh. Just meh. A couple of grammatical errors here and there (and if I see ...

Pretty damn cool. I loved the fact that it was written from the perspective of a bad guy (am a sucker for that kind of stories). The ending was pretty ...

Okay. This is just amazing. Can I say more ? Amazing, great, fabulous, fantastic, magnificent - if I knew more adjectives for great, then I would write them. It is ...

This is great. Really awesome sci-fi. Liked the twist at the end, about the fact that "something was out there" and the fact that it came from our own solar ...

I thought it was good. Confusing at times, but good. I really enjoyed this one, despite romantic stories being not my piece of cake. It felt a bit confusing at ...

is a pretty good story, safe some small problems. Vary your language, try to use synonyms even if you are working in the same sentence. Skinny cat - could use ...

Wauw...this is amazing. Some great stuff, really nice. Well written, with lots of emotions and bringing tears to my face (tears of joy, that is). It is something really great ...

Let start with the negative part. It is repetitive, that I did see. I counted at-least three uses of never and four uses of 'shame'. Stylistic choice or just lack ...

This is great...really great. Personal grief and sadness where always some of my favourite themes in literature (yeah, I know. I just like it) and the way this is described ...

Look, it could be my personal thing but so far this all seems kinda...cliché, I guess ? Maybe it is because I don't read a lot of good science-fiction or ...

Well...I laughed my ass off, that's for sure. Although I know that I have a very dark and disturbed sense of humor, so there is that. Thought it was hilarious. ...