shieldmaiden

Thanks! It's a short story and maybe they so end killing the other or simply lead one another to their final end. That's why I ended it unresolved.

Woah!

I keep forgetting about them! Right now they don't fit in the storyline, but they should pop up soon!

Thanks for pointing that out. I wanted to emphasize the names but it's not my wish to pull readers out if the story. Thanks for noticing!!! Wow, u are almost ...

Thanks for your loyal reading and reviewing!!! I look forward to your comments every day! No pressure though. ;)

Where the sunlight shines through the hole in the roof, that's where the flowers grow!

Love your reaction! And thanks for the tips about grammar and the sound effect! Truly appreciate it! :)

Love your predictions!!!! I had a lot of fun reading them you really got me thinking. :)

Thanks!

Love those ideas! Thanks! :)

Thanks for the tip Dossereana! I truly appreciate it! Any help is always a good thing to have and your encouragement is an honor! Thanks! :)

I feel bad. I only mentioned Leomong once. She's Princess Pulsa's dead mother. Thanks for the tips! I'll fix that in the future. :)

Yeah, the wedding was kind of rushed. I was trying to step out of the cliche when usually one focuses on the hesitant bride and groom's feelings. I wanted the ...

So true about the starting line! Thanks for pointing that out. And the sound effect is misplaced. I already want to fix that. I'm glad you liked it on the ...

So true about the starting line! Thanks for pointing that out. And the sound effect is misplaced. I already want to fix that. I'm glad you liked it on the ...