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  • Poetry » General, General Re: With a Whisper

    Aw, that would be so sad, but very moving.

    Apr 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 1

    Thanks so much for all the help - especially with the grammar. That is very easy to miss and I'm glad you pointed it out so that now I can ...

    Apr 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The leaving of a Lover

    Wow - just wow! How did you compact so much with only a sparse amount of words? Amazing talent you possess. My favorite line (not that there is many to ...

    Apr 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 6

    Okay, thanks. :)

    Apr 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 6

    Oops, Forsythia was a name I made up and thought sounded royal. I didn't know that it had something to do with Archie.

    Apr 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Alone

    I almost started crying ... so beautiful. I found the part about friends very applicable. Losing a friend tears me up inside. I feel that many will relate to this ...

    Apr 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 6

    Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for adding your questions about the boys. It gives me a better idea about the structure for what questions I need to answer. As always ...

    Mar 29, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Dragon Rider Chapter 1

    Too bad - it was a really enjoyable read.

    Mar 29, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 5

    Thanks so much for your review. Thanks for catching that 'stew'. I had changed it from porridge to stew and completely missed that one. I hope that the scar doesn't ...

    Mar 26, 2019
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: The Sister

    No prob. Love your work!

    Mar 15, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Culture Re: Medusa

    Okay ;)

    Mar 15, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Culture Re: Medusa

    Wow - I did not know that. Thanks for clarifying. The Greeks were truly awful on how they viewed women!

    Mar 15, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 4

    Thanks so much for your review FlamingPhoenix! I can't express how much I find them encouraging. Thanks for the tips about the question marks and pointing out that first mistake. ...

    Mar 15, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Life or Death Chapter 1 The Sand Wyvern Fort

    I read your profile and discovered that you are a Wings of Fire fan. Now I totally can picture your dragons. They are so cool!

    Mar 15, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 3

    Same here.

    Mar 15, 2019


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