shieldmaiden

Thanks Icy! I really appreciate your advice and tips! Thank you for the encouraging words and pointing out the inconsistency of the sleeve and him doubting her being able to ...

Thanks Wolfe! Loved your advice and it makes complete sense and very grounded! I'm working through my revisions and I'm glad you brought this to my attention! Again many thanks!

Hey Honora! I'm so glad you posted the rest of this chapter. This definitely feels like a well-rounded, complete chapter full of action and is by far my favorite chapter ...

Thanks Honora! I did find this to be incredibly helpful! Thanks for pointing out those grammatical errors and how less is more with regard to speaking. With regard to Iyagi, ...

Ha ha! Bantee eh? Anyways, thanks so much! It's really encouraging and I've been working on making the reader feel her emotion! Your tips from the past were very helpful! ...

Hey Honora! Thanks for the review. I'm grateful for the tips about any disconnection you felt towards the main character. I'll try to fix that during the revision. Sometimes what ...

Hee hee! Thanks my girl!!! Glad you liked it.

Wow! This is a spectacular review! Thanks for catching all those errors. They are a big help and will aid the process of editing. I'm glad you enjoyed the action! ...

No worries at all! I appreciate your honesty and I know it is hard at times. Thanks!!! It will help a lot in future chapters and when I edit

Thanks Honora! Very good tips. I'll try to give an idea what is going in her head in the future.

You make a very good point! Thank you :)

Thanks for pointing out that inconsistency with Kkachi caring what the Dragon thought. You're right...don't make sense. ;)

Thanks for the review and great tips. I'm still trying to get the hang of description, so your advice there is much appreciated. It helps a lot :)

Thanks for the review. :)

Thank you for your review and I appreciate all the great tips. I'll be trying to put them in practice straight away. Thank you for addressing the need for consistency ...