sherineahmed

no, you weren't harsh you were honest and i appreciate honesty thanks will put it into consideration for the future.

thanks for taking the time to review. i get what you mean by suggesting i add a few verses but short count poems tend to be less than 20 words. ...

thanks for the review

thank you for this review and the other reviews as well. i appreciate it.

i agree with bloodink. i love your voice in this poem. i really like how you ask the readers whom shall the man be this day. it really gets the ...

although i am not so sure what this poem is about, i have to say that i like it. care to explain ?

thanks for your comments guys. they are very helpful and i would also like to thank you for your understanding

thanks a lot, your remarks are very helpful

nice job

i really like this poem. it's deep. congratulations that the girl had her monster. keep on writing and i hope you become better and better

Thanx for your help guys. You gave me some ideas to work on. Sorry for not writing or reviewing for the past week i had mid year exams :?

that has great hope in it. take a look in it. i am sure you can make it better than it already is. good luck ;)

Don't worry about your introduction because this one is just perfect. Try to complete it and see how things work out. Tell me when you complete it. It caught my ...

forgot to tell to ask me for advice anytime loved your work! good luck

i agree, keep on the good job