User avatar

shaylinmrmjm22

  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Meet the Family (second draft)

    Thank you very much.. I agree that I need to add dimension to the narrations.

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Meet the Family (second draft)

    Thank you so much :) If you have any questions or need help understanding something, just PM me! I'm glad you really got where I was going with this and ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Meet the Family

    Lol you talk like a college major.. See u tomorrow ;) luv ya

    Sep 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 8: Truth or Lie (part one)

    Well I have already read your other publishment including part 2, so you can take everything I said there and apply it to this. I love the way you make ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Lets Fade Away for Our Pain

    Thank you so much :) and I agree I do need to work on length and quality in my writings. Thanks for your time and appreciation of literature -Shaylin

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Open Your Eyes

    I myself can not comprehend this as well as I wish I could have, but I really love the concept you are getting at. And you can always reach deeper ...

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Lets Fade Away for Our Pain

    Thank you very much :) I'm really glad that my words can touch people and make them explore and question themselves. Thanks again... -Shaylin

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Cold Hands

    Just simply wow... -Shaylin

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Strawberry Hearts -4-

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Strawberry Hearts -4-

    Wow, this is really clear and touching. I love how you really get into detail with how she was reaching out to new people. Now if only things like friendship ...

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Lets Fade Away for Our Pain

    Thank you so much :) It means a lot. I really love writing pieces that make people think and explore themselves. I am pretty young but I've always had fun ...

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Mislead To Misery

    These lyrics are incredibly inspiring. They're so deep and I relate very well. I play guitar and I try to write lyrics like this but I have limited creativity. Your ...

    Sep 27, 2014


You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote