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Re: Meet the Family (second draft)
Thank you very much.. I agree that I need to add dimension to the narrations.
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Re: Meet the Family (second draft)
Thank you so much :) If you have any questions or need help understanding something, just PM me! I'm glad you really got where I was going with this and ...
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Re: Meet the Family
Lol you talk like a college major.. See u tomorrow ;) luv ya
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Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 8: Truth or Lie (part one)
Well I have already read your other publishment including part 2, so you can take everything I said there and apply it to this. I love the way you make ...
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Re: Lets Fade Away for Our Pain
Thank you so much :) and I agree I do need to work on length and quality in my writings. Thanks for your time and appreciation of literature -Shaylin
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Re: Open Your Eyes
I myself can not comprehend this as well as I wish I could have, but I really love the concept you are getting at. And you can always reach deeper ...
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Re: Lets Fade Away for Our Pain
Thank you very much :) I'm really glad that my words can touch people and make them explore and question themselves. Thanks again... -Shaylin
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Re: Cold Hands
Just simply wow... -Shaylin
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Re: Strawberry Hearts -4-
Wow, this is really clear and touching. I love how you really get into detail with how she was reaching out to new people. Now if only things like friendship ...
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Re: Lets Fade Away for Our Pain
Thank you so much :) It means a lot. I really love writing pieces that make people think and explore themselves. I am pretty young but I've always had fun ...
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Re: Mislead To Misery
These lyrics are incredibly inspiring. They're so deep and I relate very well. I play guitar and I try to write lyrics like this but I have limited creativity. Your ...
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