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  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Editing an Author's story

    Returned to this story after six years. Ha! This is terrible. I have read all the comments and I am thankful for the much needed input. Here is mine: Holy ...

    May 26, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Editing an Author's story

    Returned to this story after six years. Ha! This is terrible. I have read all the comments and I am thankful for the much needed input. Here is mine: Holy ...

    May 26, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Incandescent

    It's been a while since I've written any reviews so, this might come off a bit rusty. I liked reading the poem. It was lyrical, though, it didn't have rhymes. ...

    Oct 13, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Just Love

    rough...but, nice and touching.

    Aug 13, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Catalina

    Yes... Off course... I am sorry if I sounded as if I was discarding the importance of other the aspects of the story. There are many things to appreciate: the ...

    Aug 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Norse Creation Narrative

    loved the description! never read Norse mythology, before; I man mostly in Greek mythology, but, now I am definitely going to read more of them. very well written, keep up ...

    Aug 12, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Catalina

    nice story, has a great moral to it. I don't what more to say to express how deeply moved I am by this story... but then, everyone is moved by ...

    Aug 12, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: Turn Everything Over

    great story tigeraye... a little different from xynophen, but... you're proving to be versatile. keep up the good work.

    Aug 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Book Lender

    nice work. enjoyed the story. the moral is very clear and sweet. keep up the good work.

    Aug 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Angels

    hello. nice poem. short and well written. very meaningful to many for it's a truth. keep writing.

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Other » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Keeper (Dialogue)

    hello nice poem. very mysterious and innovative and simple.

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Other » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Keeper (Dialogue)

    Note: This review has been deleted
    oops....

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Satire Re: The head

    well... I am happy you read the poem thoroughly and every artistic work is open to varied interpretations.

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Casualty

    thanks

    Aug 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Roger and I...

    is this a series? it's nice so far. keep up the good work.

    Aug 2, 2015


worlds buzz over us like bees, / we be splendid in new bones.
— Lucille Clifton