-
Re: Fly Away
I just wanted to tell you that I really liked this poem.I think this poem really speaks for a lot of this poem I think you really captured some of ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: French Fries.
I must admit this confuses me a lot cx but I still kind of like it.Maybe you should try to give a little bit more detailing jut so the reader ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
I really like this put a beautiful image in my mind.There really isn't much to complain about here.The only bad thing I see in this poem is in the first ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: The Generation
Hello tgirly.I just wanted to tell you that I think you did an amazing job on this.I completely agree with how you depicted this generation.I think so many things are ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: The Mission of Life
I think you did a terrific job.I can tell that you really put your heart into this poem.I think you should really be proud of this. c:
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Girl with the jet black hair
Thanks yeah I know.I realized all that after i published it i'm in the process of rewriting it now
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: The man who held the world
I absolutely love this poem.It's short yet it says so much in a just a few lines.Good job! c:
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: The Taste of Mirrors
I absolutely love this c:
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)
Hi I just wanted to tell you that I love you're story and I'm going to catch on the other chapters to.Keep it up c:
Sep 12, 2013
