shadowraiki

Aye. I believe you when you say that this is a true story and not for a second did I consider this fake. I won't ask if this is your ...

Whoa. She's dead. That was totally unexpected. I at first thought that Ben was in a rehab center, but that really caught me off guard. It's a very tragic tale. ...

Pink Tassels He had pink tassels on his bike handles. Short and simple. Leaves me wondering what pink tassels is all about. I watched as he rode in circles, his ...

Hello. I read through your essay and although you want some ideas, I find myself only able to give them by writing another, similar essay. Though I am on a ...

This first piece was a little bit difficult to understand. What I think is going on is that the man's half daughter comes up to visit ?her sister?, but the ...

You may want to put this in Romantic Short Stories. After all, love is in the title. If you can't decide on another title, I say keep it because it ...

Is it just me or do the paranthesises come out as long whispers etching into my mind? Or am I just going crazy? My impression of it is that this ...

If you don't mind me asking, what competition would this be for? I want to give you feed back regarding the theme and comparing it to what you actually need ...

Well, so we meet again :D. I saw this with 100 views and no replies and thought, "That has to change!" This is a long piece, so it'll be hard ...

Funny, serious, and realistic would be three words I would describe this as. It was great, I felt like I was by your side as you struggled to learn this ...

I'll admit, it was a bit confusing until I read your spoiler. Then I read the passage again and fully understood it. Though the last two sentences (before I smile) ...

I told myself I wouldn't write a full review, but here goes anyways. I couldn't help it. But first, always the good. I can't believe I just read a piece ...

You wanted a harsh response, but I'm afraid that's beyond me. I'm just too nice. But all joking aside, here is what I thought about your piece. It holds my ...

Hell, I was saddened by this. Just the thought that all good things come to an end. We all know that it must happen, but we never want to see ...

I can relate even though being a guy. I have a sister who went to a college that begins with an H and ends with a D. It is hard ...