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  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Eight Hours

    Awwww....why is this so heart breaking ?? No one died, no one had cancer, yet.... it broke my heart into pieces. Maybe it's because I'm a sucker for stories with ...

    Sep 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Paper Airplane

    Hi there :) To start with, I LOVED your poem. And...I'm not that good with reviewing yet, but I'm gonna try. Most poems that I come across, don't even make ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Death by happiness

    Wow...why is this so nice? It's true what you've written here, my favorite is "to chew and gnaw on lifeless beauty", I have to admit, it holds so true, writers ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Together

    hi :) This was so amazing, long distance relationships are never easy and you happened to describe it so perfectly. There was a perfect sync between emotions and the imagery, ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh what do you see?

    Hello there :) Ahhh your poem is great, written so differently ! And for the review, I'd like to say that maybe you could add little bit of more emotions, ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: (Insert Name Here)

    Hey:) I liked this vey much, the storyline and everything, but what I felt is that there was just a little dragging in the beginning. And... I donno, can a ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: The Night

    hi :) Ummm your poem is rad ! I loved the flow, and the fact that the imagery was so clear and everything was explained so well. But since it's ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Block of Imagination

    Hi :) Ummmm this poem I loved, I can tell I've been through the same phase once, I had been sooo blank, when I held a pen. Because in my ...

    Aug 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Going Into The Woods

    Hello :) So yeah your storyline is pretty cool, it's so dreamy and duhhh! funny too. I'm sure you wrote it just for fun, but since it's a review, I'd ...

    Aug 27, 2016


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— Kaladin (Words of Radiance by Brandon Sanderson)