-
Re: Eight Hours
Awwww....why is this so heart breaking ?? No one died, no one had cancer, yet.... it broke my heart into pieces. Maybe it's because I'm a sucker for stories with ...
Sep 8, 2016 -
Re: Paper Airplane
Hi there :) To start with, I LOVED your poem. And...I'm not that good with reviewing yet, but I'm gonna try. Most poems that I come across, don't even make ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Death by happiness
Wow...why is this so nice? It's true what you've written here, my favorite is "to chew and gnaw on lifeless beauty", I have to admit, it holds so true, writers ...
Aug 29, 2016 -
Re: Together
hi :) This was so amazing, long distance relationships are never easy and you happened to describe it so perfectly. There was a perfect sync between emotions and the imagery, ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Oh what do you see?
Hello there :) Ahhh your poem is great, written so differently ! And for the review, I'd like to say that maybe you could add little bit of more emotions, ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: (Insert Name Here)
Hey:) I liked this vey much, the storyline and everything, but what I felt is that there was just a little dragging in the beginning. And... I donno, can a ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: The Night
hi :) Ummm your poem is rad ! I loved the flow, and the fact that the imagery was so clear and everything was explained so well. But since it's ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Block of Imagination
Hi :) Ummmm this poem I loved, I can tell I've been through the same phase once, I had been sooo blank, when I held a pen. Because in my ...
Aug 27, 2016 -
Re: Going Into The Woods
Hello :) So yeah your storyline is pretty cool, it's so dreamy and duhhh! funny too. I'm sure you wrote it just for fun, but since it's a review, I'd ...
Aug 27, 2016
