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Re: My Grape Kisses
Hi, I like the title its original to me at least because people usually say chocolate kisses or something else but that is good. The poem really spoke to me ...
Sep 10, 2015 -
Re: Stop Comparing Me!!!
Hi, When I read the title I was thinking about how I have been compared to a lot of people and its not an experience I would like to keep ...
Sep 10, 2015 -
Re: Protector #4
Hi, I really like the story line you really caught my attention. You described how she really felt about being in her predicament with her being in an antique store ...
Sep 10, 2015 -
Re: Paper Planes (Ch5)
Hi, I probably should have read the first four chapters because I would like to know how this all started. Anyways this chapter was good it had good detail when ...
Sep 9, 2015 -
Re: Forgotten Fire, Chapter 2 - Cuckoo
Hi, The story was very interesting I liked how you detailed how her room looked considering that you said she was a neat person. The fact that she is pacing ...
Sep 9, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 4 *
Hi, It was good the plot was perfect. I think you should work on the rest because this would sound like a great book. You really caught my attention with ...
Sep 9, 2015 -
Re: SABLE AND KANISHA: Why Us Lord
Hi, Okay to begin with it was good at the beginning of the story but as you go on it gets uninteresting I'm not saying don't write another long one ...
Sep 9, 2015 -
Re: Rippling waters, singing skies
I really like the title because it grabbed my attention and for your sake thats good. I Iike the plot and how it all coincides together with the title. The ...
Sep 9, 2015 -
Re: 25 Things to Keep in Mind When Surviving a Horror Novel
Hi, This is funny but sadly true. I love watching scary movies and you just described everything just like i would. I mean like come on don't look in the ...
Sep 9, 2015 -
Re: The Waiting Game
Hi, I can relate with this story with him waiting for an important person to talk to I think everybody has had that problem boy and girl so I feel ...
Sep 9, 2015 -
Re: Untitled
Hi, The story was well written out with all the characters and a good plot to go for. This fantasy is very original I praise you for your creative and ...
Sep 9, 2015 -
Re: Currently Spazzing
This an awesome way to describe reading a book over again and feeling the same sensation or finding new things to love more about it. I know this is in ...
Sep 9, 2015 -
Re: The Prize
I think if you described the way the bird picks at the man what it sounded like hearing his flesh be ripped off by the bird. I like the plot ...
Sep 9, 2015