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Re: A shot of Arrogance (Chapter Two)
Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers, as requested. On my plate there was a huge pile of sliced chicken breast and an uncomfortably large dump of mash potato. There ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter One - Old)
Hey Skins, here to review as requested, representing the Four Musketeers :) It's an extremely rough draft. I'd hope not after 10 reviews ;) My father was determined on finding ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Playthings [rewritten version]
Hey Rosie :D Here as one of the four Musketeers to review at your service :) First, wow! This has been expanded like a bazillion times more! Well done! Now ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] The Postman
Hey Spiky One without a Home :) I'm here representing one of the four Musketeers. One for all! And all for one! Thank you for visiting our WRFF thread. The ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hey Calligraphy :) I'm here representing one of the four Musketeers . One for all! And all for one! Thank you for visiting our WRFF thread. On to the review ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Bullet Wounds
So this is a short story I submitted for SKin's contest :) Review/comment. Thankss (: Probably should take this author's note out/put it in spoilers. Also, when writing an author's ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter Rapping Battle
lol that was fantastic, the ending was awesome :) I found no errors, though regarding script formatting, you don't need to use quotation marks if you've used cues like "Ron:", ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: How to be a Fictional Writer (Short Story)
This was my first assignment in my Writer's Craft class.. We were given a the poem How To Be a Poet by Wendell Berry and told to do something of ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Untitled As of now (Formerly Mark of the Stones)
Hey. First, if you haven't noticed, it's kinda hard to read bunched up text the way you've submitted your story. It would be so much easier to read if you ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Vanished Prolouge
Good afternoon, First and foremost, you spelled "prologue" wrong in your title. Things I noticed immediately after reading for the first time: 1) I know I'm not the only person ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: FREAK
Hey :) You helped me with my physics, and I hope I can provide some input for your novel :) From what I can remember of the old version, this ...
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: Capital Vices - Chapter 1
Hey, here to review whilst eating the rest of the red wine jelly that was in the fridge: A time-wearied farmer raised his fist in anger at her haste the ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Obsoletely Perfect
!!! Am so sad! *laments tearfully to herself over her breakfast* ... *takes a bite of food* ... *wails* !!! That was so awful! I can't believe I managed to ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: You won
What an interesting read! It was very well written, and I could find no grammar, syntax or other glaring errors besides this one: I hated being the hero by your ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Saving Lilly~ New Chapter Four
You forgot to correct the formatting on this one :P Dear reader, My name will stay unknown to you. I will trust you are a good enough citizen to save ...
Sep 2, 2010
