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Back again! Let's see how you've done!!!! Swords clashed, sending sparks cascading through the night air as battle cries peeled out like broken bells from every corner of the valley. ...

Ashleylee : Thank yo so much! That review definitley went above and beyond what I requested! You are amazing! *hugs*.

Thank you both! I'll definitley look into your comments and edit my story! Cheers!

Lyrical Sunshine : Thank you so much! I'll definitley look into that sentence and do some reconstruction on it! I appreciate all your kind words and I'm glad you enjoyed ...

Anti-pop and Fellow : Thank you so much! *blushes* I'm so glad you liked it! I wrote it for my creative writing class a while ago, so my teacher has ...

Thanks so much! *Goes to fix now*

Yeah I agree with the above poster. The characters in that book were flat. I got about 20 pages in and put it back on the shelf. It was a ...

Probably. I should go check to see what I can find about the author. Still, it was not worth reading.

Ashley! : Thanks so much for your crit!!! I owe you BIG time! I'll definitley be editing everything down as soon as I can!!! I'm glad you like it. Definitley ...

Xena: I appreciated your...insightful comments Kris: Thanks so much!!!! I really appreciated it. I know it is a bit fast paced (but I only have 4000 words to work with. ...

Sorry I'm bumping this. I really need reviews because I majorly, MAJORLY edited it! It's almost a whole different story. Please R and R! I would love you forever.

Being Edited

Thanks so much Stella! I'll definitley work on it!!!

Hey again Jamie! Here's my crit! OK, this is just an idea that popped into my head one night, so even I don't think it's all that great. I wanted ...

Hey sorry, I didn't know how to reinsert this into my previous post, so I just made a new one. Anyway, onto my critique! Sorry it took me FOREVER to ...