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Thanks Niraco! I titled it "About Me" because this is what is written under the About Me section on my YWS profile. So when someone clicks the About Me link ...

I'm confused towards your comment as well...but thank you! haha :)

Hi Stygianlover! This was just a bit of short prose. Just a little bit of doodling around with a pen, for my part! I think I'm not going to finish ...

Hi Buzz! Thank you for your review! The links were not intentional, and I had originally separated the poem into stanzas! Unfortunately, I think there is a virus on my ...

Thank you! It's interesting that you got an innocent child feeling from this. That was the farthest from what I was thinking, but it's your job to interpret it! Thanks ...

Wow thank you so much! Your opinion really means much to me, as I see how much of an active member you are on YWS. I've found your writing to ...

Thank you very much! This poem was supposed to be separated into stanzas, but the program isn't really letting me. Guess I'll keep it the way it is, maybe it ...

Working on it, thank you!

I totally agree! Thank you so much for your input. I definitely want to go back and revise it. Actually, I did try to make the poem more meaning full ...

Thank you! I have never approached writing poetry before, which is why I treasure this review so very much! I would love to learn more about the principles of poetry, ...

Such a good flow, Loved the pattern, the rhythm! And your poem is so relevant as well, which makes it a huge plus. Can't find any mistakes, you've formatted it ...

Thank you so much! This is just what I needed! I will go over it, you have some truly wonderful ideas and have taken my editing to a whole new ...

Hey, that's good. I wouldn't have connected the reference between kisses stolen and cheating on someone, even though it is the most obvious one and I should have. haha

Of course not, that was not my intention! I'm sorry that it came off of that way, but I just wanted her to know where I was coming from as ...

Thank you! :)