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Re: What The Stars See - Chapter Four
Is it too long?
Dec 18, 2008 -
Re: Message Three.
I can't even critique this. It gave me goosebumps. It was great. You could make it better. But it is very beautiful.
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: infinite forever
I didn't like this, not exactly sure why. maybe it's your spelling and puncuation. or your lack of capital letters. and it's too stephanie meyer-ish.
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Sea Foam Green.
Thank you :D
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: 11 Years Old
Very nice. In places in flowed in others it didn't, i'd work on that. And I would make it long. But very nice emotion.
Mar 3, 2008 -
Re: Under Their Wings; Chapter Two
Thanks ReasonIsTreason! I'll be sure to post the next chapters after I write them!
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: Under Their Wings; Chapter Two
Thank you :)
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: ♥ Art Boy
Beautiful Story.
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Enough
This was really moving. I can't find a single thing to say exept, please, please write more.
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Jodi Picoult
You must read nineteen minutes.
Feb 28, 2008