sasha_bumble_bee

Okay, let me start off by saying that you have a LOT of creativity here---almost too much. The reason I say that is that a LOT of information about this ...

UGH, this is a BEAUTIFUL poem! "And so the shell stayed there for many years, Basking in the love it rightfully deserved. With it's patience, and though it gave up ...

Hey, LJF! Oh, how we all can relate... It is funny, isn't it, how you could be practically obsessed with a person for a while and then one day you ...

Hey, Querencia! Okay, may I just start by saying that this poem is REALLY cool---it perfectly illustrates the feeling of things that are ended before they should be, and the ...

Dear Joseph Hazel, Thank you for giving the world this lovely poem! It beautifully describes the feelings that I assume you're trying to convey---being in the cold with someone you ...

Hey, mejr! I LOVE this poem. It's so small, and yet it just perfectly encapsulates the feeling of being alone at night. You might want to add a "that" at ...

Hey, raj! Okay, may I first start off by saying that I'm already very fond of these characters, especially Kate. She's very well-developed and her humor is definitely the highlight ...

Hello---quick review, here! I'm very excited to read other chapters of this story, as it's really cool-sounding! I loved the bit about how she always adored the snow but wanted ...