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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Am Dark, But There Is Hope

    Actually I want to say that I didn't realize when I was reviewing that this was so personal, and I'm really sorry if I offended you or hurt your feelings. ...

    Jun 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dear Brother

    Sorry but I just have to say how sweet that is Clay. Big brothers should always think about how what they do affects their little sisters--and you seem like a ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Chiffon and Moonlight

    Yeah, sorry about the shortness. I guess I forgot to mention that it had to be less than 350 words long.

    Jun 7, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition

    Fantastic job! I loved this, and my english teacher asked to see it!

    May 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: archaeopteryx

    This is spectacular and I have nothing more to add! I've read it through twice now and still am speechless!! Fantastic job! Sarebear

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: abiotic

    Beautiful--sorry if this is a terrible review, but really touching and lovely!!!!!!

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Moon

    thanks flyers. like your poem

    Dec 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cry for me

    I guess I didn't really understand kind of cunfuzzled me. I didn't get what was happening. Maybe I'm stupid, but could you clarify a bit? Thanks. Sarebear

    May 12, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fourty Nine Pennies Sat on the Dining Room Table

    This is really funny. Reviewer #1 assumed that Tracy was the cotton candy vendor. Reviewer #2 thought that Jason was the toothless man. Actually, I had thought that they were ...

    May 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: .

    I like it a lot! I agree- a little bit more about the poison...maybe a flashback? I enjoyed it and think you should definitely keep going.

    Apr 30, 2010


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