sarebear

Thanks!

Thanks!

Thank you very much!

Sure, thanks!!!

Hi SS, thanks so much for the review! Would you mind being more specific about what should be revised? Then I can do it! Also, I recognize that the last ...

Hmmm I see where you're coming from. I also think poetry is a very flexible medium and that's what's cool about it. Anyway, thanks for your input on my work!

Hi AE, thanks for your review! This form is actually quite standard for spoken word poetry, which is more stream of consciousness and is often written in free verse. Check ...

Actually, it's about a girl. So you were right. But it doesn't matter, the message is the same.

Thanks adam dear :)

Words, "Bear" can mean "To bear the burden" or "The grizzly-bear attacked the kitten". "Bare" means naked. See for examples.

OH MY GOD LILI! I thought of "The Tell-Tale Heart," too!!! :)

I think people are always looking for reviews, Sarah!

Okay, thanks for the reminder. I totally forgot. But now I am back, and I will devote at least 10 minutes to this. Maybe. :) So...I'll do nitpicks first. The ...

I will totally come back and review this because I found it nothing less than un-put-down-able. PLEASE post on my wall and remind me that I have to come back ...

Someone should send this to Nate. He definitely needs to see this. And I totally relate to the thing about banning us!