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Gosh , i like this alot Lizzeh. : ) "I'd stand in the downpour, Until twilight if you asked. Heavy drops of inky-coloured rain, Soaking me to the skin; I ...

Wow, this is an original idea : ) So well done for that, like! "hello darling you look a bit gaunt a little bit anorexic hungry eat me won't you? ...

:) Wow this is great. hehe "I’m on the verge of dieing. I’m stuck inside my class I want to burn the dreaded math And stab it in the – ...

Wow, short and sweet ^-^ "Can a heart, once loved, be found bleeding silent, not a sound, sadness evident, forever bound, down upon the blackened ground. " I very much ...

Wow, this is good... "I don't write to impress, Just to merely express; Like the orient. " I am not too sure about the last line of this. I love ...

This is quite amazing, i like it alot. Your descriptions are very well done andd also very unique. :) One thing i'd sugest is capital letters and such, just to ...

I really like the idea behind this, it's great. I'd love to here it with music. I'd try and work it out myself but i'm no good with chords and ...

Hehe, i like this, it's nicely done. The rhyming is all good, maybe add some punctuation - capital letters. But i suppose this doesn't matter much seen as it'll be ...

Wow, this is pretty good. I like it. The whole story/idea/concept is nice. "I walked outside to the dark sky above I saw firelights but, they were bombs dropping down. ...

Wow, i quite like this. :) It's super. I especially like these two little bits; "The dreary rain just pounding. Can't you see the difference between us. This could never ...

Oh my, well i liked this, but i am not too good at reading old language. (If that's what you'd call it, i'm sure you know what i mean haha). ...

Ooh, this is good i like it. I'm not going to like comment on anything too technical as i'd probably be wrong about it. Sorry i'm not much help. XD ...

"His voice is sweet like honey, Smooth and delicious, Filling me with sickly pleasures. Arms surround me protectively, The beat of his heart; Creating the tempo for my fortress." Oof, ...

I very much like the idea of this, it's super. Maybe try improving on your punctuation and structure abit. But all in all this is great. Good work. :D x

Gosh, this is deep and very moving and such. "I could still smell the delicious steak drenched in thick, warm garlic sauce and the buttery, roasted mashed potatoes." This reminded ...