Published September 26, 2007
This is a sonnet to counteract my own -- "Darkness in Love" that was made by my bro. He wanted me to put this up and see what people think about it. Personally I think it's deep. Maybe he came from the Shakespearean era? Anyhow, what do you think? I didn't write this!! hehe
Reason to Madness
Thy logic ever falsifies truth
Oh Romeo art thou doused in naiveté
One ever bears intangible fruit
In life’s quasi-harmonious party
Love thy say cause spark in event
Tremors thou earth and tree do not prefer
The great Montague will refer to as bent
The ramification of act of heart defer
Blood be bane and bane be blood
Romeo shame the night of spawn
Wrought a sympathy out of the tear-filled flood
Capulet’s head or procurement of thy fawn?
Romeo, a madness do envelopeth thee
Possibly seeking to set us free.
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Hope that someone can review this too...
Hahaa thanks for the review! He was soo pleased with what you said! hehe! It's not exactly old language but somewhat patterned to it. Am so glad that you like it =)
Oh my, well i liked this, but i am not too good at reading old language. (If that's what you'd call it, i'm sure you know what i mean haha).
So anyways, i can't really comment if there is anything wrong with this, as i wouldn't know, as i'm not an expert.
Sorry i couldn't be of more help. XD
Anyways, i like it, it's super.
Bye,
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