sapphireluna

OH that makes more sense! Any time. XXX, sapphireluna

Thank you! I'll take everything you say into consideration for my final draft. About the where were thing- I feel really stupid saying this but I never knew it was ...

OK thank you so much! This is perfect

K good! I'm glad

Oh course!

Yes! Thank you.

I'm still so impressed by this short and I really hope you make more like it!

Hi! By the way, this is a draft! It is totally going to be edited.

Really? WOW.

Thank you for talking about the backstory and descriptions paragraphs, i will totally keep that in mind. I'm glad you enjoyed the dialogue, and I will be definitely changing the ...

So, I've got to start this review with WOW. The descriptions in this poem are amazing! You tie everything together nicely. I feel like the words "my stop is next" ...

That's really sweet of you.

Okay yep. I'm crying. A lot.

Just re read it. Still in shock. I think I'm crying

Awesome! Merry Xmas to you too. XXX, sapphireluna