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Re: Piper
Hi daisy4854, Your story reminds me of the Phantom of The Opera. It is quite mysterious. I like the way you have described the opera house. I also appreciate the ...
Jul 9, 2023 -
Re: Dead or Alive
Quite a piece you've written, Leiilan. It seems as if the main character has given up and cannot tap onto his/her full potential and is helpless. They want to do ...
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Re: glitter at christmastime
I actually imagined this in a different context. I really liked how you have compared 'glitter' with 'memories' and how difficult it is to get rid of them. And this, ...
Dec 16, 2022 -
Re: treasures
It's such a sweet poem. And it's so true. Appreciate the similarity and comparison between love and materialistic treasures. Many people want money, and they are willing to sacrifice so ...
Dec 9, 2022 -
Re: the road of memories
I just love the way you have written it! the poem has a certain kind of flow to it and its adorable since it's easy to imagine which family member ...
Dec 9, 2022
