saily.kiwalkar

Hi! I was too absorbed in the poem to find mistakes. I'm not good at this, but the expressive nature of your poem is impressive. I liked the following lines... ...

Hi! I loved your poem. The opposing ideas have been expressed well. I think you could change 'wondrous joys' to something better. It doesn't go with 'deceitful lies.' The third ...

Hi! That is a nice one. It definitely feels just the same when someone close to you hurts you, not caring and not even understanding you for once. I liked ...

Hi! I liked your poem. The first stanza though could get better. Mandorelute is right. It isn't clear enough. I must say that the second and the fourth stanza are ...

Hi! The poem is a nice one. It is simple and I really enjoyed reading it. I agree with darko.demark666, especially about the second stanza. Its good but you can ...

Hi! Well, I can see the anger flowing through your words. A nice poem and it certainly delivers the message straight. I think that is how exactly a girl feels ...

Hi dogs! It was a nice and a simple poem. Childhood days are certainly the most beautiful days in one's life. Apart from the mistakes mentioned, I think that it ...

Hi! I seriously wish i had that kind of attitude. The way you have expressed your mindset is really superb! The 'go-getter' kind of attitude is well-shown in this piece. ...

Hi!!! This piece is really cute. It seems you definitely have a rocking group of friends! Just one question. I didn't really get the meaning of the word 'plane' you ...

Hi! I liked your poem. I could definitely get whatever you were trying to express through the poem. I find it a 'straight-from-the-heart' kind of poem and so I don't ...