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This thing is both confusing and interesting at the same time. I mean I sort of get the whole idead; it's about a man examining his life, but it's just ...

This was a good story, you should expand this alot more. Maybe give more description to the characters and the background to why this situation happened. I like that you ...

Vampire stories are starting to appeal to me so I thought I'd read this, so glad I did this is a great read. The story was good as was the ...

This is an interesting read but for me it was a bit too short and simplified. I think you should have given some more detail to what the main character ...

For me choosing the best book i've read is difficult since I have read alot of books, but off the top of my head I would have to say The ...

To start off with I don't like starting a review with the bad things but for this I think i should. First I think the beginning sentence could be reworded, ...

I know that Peanutgallery007 has already said this but it does seem more of a poem than a short story, was that intentional or a mistake. Also the basic plot ...

The worst book I've ever read was... Debatable Space. I can't remember the author's name since it has been so long since I read it. The characters were too basic ...

I think you got the whole Lucy being envious of Kate thing down perfectly, that was great. But in my opinion I think you should have gone a little bit ...

The story for me was intersting, I like the idea of the comet and the Colour Decrease and all that. But I think you should have explained things in some ...

This did indeed interest me, left me wanting more from it. I think you should make more of this like another chapter for it. There was a few things i ...

In my opinion this is a great attempt at fantasy but it doesn't really give me the sense of danger you were (i'm guessing) trying to show. When the demon ...