running_with_the_devil

Ah I am a fan of the films so it was nice to see fan fiction that wasn't about Harry Potter and Twilight. Thank you. Haha. It was very captivating ...

It was short, but I could totally relate to it. This is a fantastic poem and I'm sure many people have felt that way in their lives too, so well ...

I adore your similies. They are truly unique and fit with the mood of this poem. This poem has a very distinct mood and you did a fantastic job of ...

Ooh! Very obscure!! But I liked it. I liked how you said "vivid imagery" Vivid is a good word. And imagery is something different from "picture" which is so commonly ...

Really fantastic. There were a few interesting grammatical errors, but nothing that murdered me. I like this. I always love a new spin on a classic tale. And this certainly ...

Hey honey! I liked this! I think you read it to me before. :] Isn't it weird how you wrote about my poem "Two" which is on this site!? Weird. ...

Aw I adore this. I would feel so loved if my friends wrote for me. I like the rhymes. They flow, they arent forced, thats good. :) I'm sure you ...

Short, sweet and straight to the point. No beating around the bush. Haha :) Perhaps you could have used a few more interesting words. But other than that I actually ...

Thats really great!!! I like it. A few things... Why is is 'Uncle Charlie'? Wouldnt it be grandpa? And why does she call Carlilse by his first name. Wouldnt he ...

Wow. This is so well written. The way it was worded...flawless. :] I didnt really understand why you capitalized somethings... And twenty Oaks could not possess The beauty of a ...

Mmm. Interesting piece. I had issues relating to it because this seems rather religious in which, that isn't me, but I liked it other than that! It was well written ...

OH GOODNESS! I LOVE THIS! This piece just captured me and makes me wonder what the full story is with Jake and Sam. I loved the way that you went ...

Hmmm.... I suppose I didn't exactly understand some parts of it. For example: (as pale as angels?) or (from the dark clouds outside?) or (to its roots, or slightly above?) ...

Ladydark, this is amazing. So...passionate. I am just...amazed at how beautifully written this is. I love the setting as well. You can just image the two in such a dark ...

Oh wow, this is great. :] If I'm not mistaken this is rather...philosophical, no? I love philosophy. Wondering, why are we here? How did we get here? How long do ...