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no, no, your review wasn't harsh at all. :) Thanks for your insight, ferru!

heya Storm, thanks for the review! I wasn't sure if I should say this but this is really not my story. (Not like I copied someone else's - I just ...

Yeah, I know. I totally just did this for fun since the actual joke seemed a little bland to me but thanks for your thoughts, anyway!

Ah, thanks! and you just made mine. ;)

thanks for the review, Shey! I am such a grammar freak, I don't know how I didn't notice all those commas and periods in unnecessary places. Gracias for pointing it ...

Thanks for the review, skylnn. I didn't even notice that in the beginning! As for the praise the lord ending... well, this was how my dad told the joke and ...

oh my gosh, I am SO SORRY :O Please uh, excuse me...

Great job, Dest! I think this is the best I've seen of the whole story. ;)

oh whoops, reviewer-error! Sorry about that ;)

You're welcome! Ah no, it wasn't too long. Thanks for pointing out some of that stuff - I am very much enlightened. XD

*sighs in relief* You're welcome!

My cousin wanted to leave it as a cliffhanger, even though she said it was the worst experience ever and she'll never write again! Thanks anyway for the review, Grace! ...

Ah - I see. Thank you for explaining. That's enlightening. : )

Yeah, your first point confused me as well when I read it. I'll be sure to tell her, though! ;D Thanks!

aww, thanks for this! She will be honored to think someone considers her a writer. xP But overall, I agree with many of your points.