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Re: This is a Love Story - Part 6
Hi Sarah! So, let me get this straight. This girl, Aubrey, hired a boyfriend because she's sick of her sister thinking she's immature? Well. For practically thinking she hates her, ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 4.2)
I thought I might as well finish the second part to this chapter I've already dived into. :P There are several more odd dreams Star experiences before she feels something ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 4.1)
Hello there, scribbles and Happy Review Day to you! I read one of your previous chapters, never reviewed it and jumped ahead to this. There really isn't a lot going ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Chapter Two (The Mate Between Brothers) Improved Version
Hi Bailey! I read the first chapter of this novel a while ago, and had been meaning to check this one out but as you can see, I never got ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: do re mi
'ello DemonGoddess and Happy Review Day to you! This is kind of a sad parody of this popular song - depressing, I guess you could say. But I like how ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: The Monster of Me: Chapter 2
Hey-a Sunset! I hope you're doing fantastic today. This chapter seemed pretty short, so I thought I'd give it a go and review it. I didn't read the previous chapter, ...
Aug 25, 2017 -
Re: Marshy the Marshmallow
OMG this is like, the cutest thing ever. I mean, the last part was really sad and for a brief second there the thought of shoving an oozing s'mores into ...
Aug 24, 2017 -
Re: Creatures Of The Night -Prologue-Rebirth
Hey-a Allison, I hope you're doing fantastic. I'll just be writing out a (hopefully) quick review for you today. I Can Be Nit-Picky Sometimes A blond woman from press lifted ...
Aug 23, 2017 -
Re: To The Boy In The Casket...
Hi Leonine. I saw your little note below me, and wow, this is a beautiful piece considering it came from your journal. (you don't even want to know what a ...
Aug 22, 2017 -
Re: Beauty is Truth
Good morning, Werthan! This is merely rosette dropping in for a quick review. Actually, my 100th review - WHAAA??!! Yay for me!!! *throws confetti* Anyway. Excuse me. To begin with, ...
Aug 18, 2017 -
Re: Stained smiles
Good afternoon, Lily! I hope you're doing grand. I've been wandering around the Green Room, looking for something short to review and came across this. I could not resist. I ...
Aug 17, 2017 -
Re: Time
Hey-a Sam! Well. This is a short work. And I can pretty much guarantee this review won't be very long, either. c: So without further ado, here are a few ...
Aug 17, 2017 -
Re: An introduction
Hi Rosa! Welcome to the YWS :) I certainly do hope you enjoy your time here, and improve your writing skills. For English not being your mother tongue, you seem ...
Aug 16, 2017 -
Re: To Follow Jesus
Hey-o Arianna! I am here to review your work as requested :) Firstly, before I say much else, I would recommend splitting this huge wall of words up into little ...
Aug 15, 2017 -
Re: The Dying Sun[NOVEL] Chap 11
Yo Allison - congrats on being my 95th review! *throws confetti* I'm sorry to say I never actually read any of your previous chapters... so I am a bit lost. ...
Aug 15, 2017
