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  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Portrait II

    Hello dear Thus is ronak here to review your poem. It explains the grief and pain which surround in any war, to the personnels serving for their country and also ...

    Dec 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Portrait

    Hello dear, I am ronak here to review your poetry , once again i had someone who is at all his best . The topic you chose for your poetry ...

    Dec 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Dancing with the Devil

    Hello dear , It was really a horror with some sparkles of suspense and thrill. I liked when it came.. "I could feel his breath, close to my ear" This ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A windows' reflection

    Hello dear, I read your poem and it took me some time to make a view on your work, at last i got on some points. You need to learn ...

    Dec 17, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Courting

    Hii dear, I liked the way u are thinking and imagining this world its totally outstanding. And the words used by you are quite intresting, felt good to see some ...

    Dec 17, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: One Chance

    Hello dear, i found your story quite intresting and i was really a fantastic story. You have good imagination power but the problem i found was your grammer and some ...

    Dec 17, 2015


Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)